I like this one better than the second because it conveys more of a story. I would also have had the left elf with her hand on the right shoulder of the right one. I'm no expert by any means but the picture should be having the viewer asking the questions. Do they see love in the spring ? Have they been together before ? Is this how they live of is this something naughty ? The more questions a viewer asks, the more interesting a picture becomes. Maybe this is deeper than you wanted to go, but really great picture should ask something from the viewer.